What Else I Would Like to know about Arguements

One thing that I would like to know about arguements that I feel we haven't covered yet is how to make an effective introduction. I am not sure if I am supposed to try to persuade my audience to take my side in the first paragraph, or if I should just tell them what I believe should be done. I know that introductions should be attention-getters but I don't want to bombard my reader with my opinion right away, so I may have to edit my introduction a little.

My Audience

My audience will mostly be the managers of companies that test their products on animals. I will be trying to persuade a 24-year-old woman that has a pet not to buy products that were tested on animals. My essay will be about animal rights and I will explain why animal rights need to be protected in the United States of America. This woman will hopefully be persuaded because she has a new puppy and if I find some information and interesting facts that will help her realize why animal testing is wrong, then I will succeed in convincing her of my ideas and point of view.

My Last Argument

The last argument I was in was with my mom. It took place a couple of weeks ago when I went clubbing in the cities with some friends. I had to lie to my mom about it because I knew she didn't want me to go (my parents are very old fashioned.) I told my mom I was going to Byron to stay with my friends family. She found out the day that I left from my tattle-tale little sister and called me steaming mad on the phone. I argued with her for about 15 minutes when I was shopping in Charlotte Russe at the Mall of America. It was actually kind of embarassing. I tried to explain that I was 19 years old and in college and I should be able to do what I wanted to do, but this didn't persuade her. This could be an appeal to pity fallacy because I wanted to make her feel sorry for me using emotions. I finally just hung up on her and waited two days to call back. This probably wasn't the best solution but it worked and now I can tell her anything and she doesn't really care.

The Fallacy That I tend to do the Most

I would say that one fallacy I tend to do the most would be the genetic fallacy. This is because I always listen to my parents and believe what they say. I assume that since they are my parents, they are always right. Usually this is the case, especially for my mom who I seldom argue with. My dad is a different story, however. The past couple of years have been difficult for us. We always seem to argue endlessly about stupid things, but being four hours away from home has helped us. On the contrary, I very seldom believe things I read on the internet or in magazines. This is because I have generalized all information in these sources to be unreliable, but really sometimes they could have true information.

Personal Essays

What I Liked Most about Writing a Personal Essay

I've always liked writing personal essays because I feel that they let the reader get a sense of who I really am. I like talking about past experiences in my life that were funny, sad, interesting, or happy. The personal essay I just wrote about was a humorous story that told the audience how my identity had been forever changed by one embarrassing incident. Overall, personal essays are probably one of my favorite essays to write about because they come easily for me and I'm always pleased with the finished product.

What I Liked Least about Writing a Personal Essay

As I mentioned above, I usually like to write personal essays so it could be hard for me to pick out what I like least about writing them. However, what I like least about writing a personal essay is all of the details I have to try to remember. Sometimes it's hard for me to think back and remember specific things about a certain event so I just make things up. This probably isn't the best thing to do because it can be a little inaccurate at times, but there is really no other alternative.